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I redid this from my last mario video. please tell me what you think, what you like about it and what i can improve on. please rate even if you hate it.
also got the ending idea from "Eddsworld" tthat one video where he jumps in the computer.
The 1st thing i would suggest for you to improve on would have to be the length of your videos, and i dont see why this is under all audiences since its showing drug use, cartoon or not still the same thing :P. I would suggest to have longer flash animations and possibly more detail? im not much of a flash artist myself (or what ever u wanna call urselves ;P) but more detail might be nice.
It had potential. It really did. But... it was unoriginal, short, and it ended right when it would have gotten funny.
I understand this is your second submission, and I respect your courage, but please, please think deeply about your next submission. Look around. See what other artists are doing, and how the audience is responding to what topics, and animate accordingly. Thank you.
Needs a bit of... oomf?
I liked it. Its just that there was not much going on and it was very confusing at times. It was too short and maybe you could have tried adding voices? Animations were funny and adorable. Overall 3.5 out of 10... Needs work.
Who's tired of extremely poorly done mario movies? Who's tired of mario flash cartoons entirely? I for one certainly am. Get off the bandwagon, and do something original for once. No one wants to see this garbage.
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