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There may be a glitch or two in there, but considering that I did this last semester in a matter of 5 days, this ain't too bad. ^^
Voicework is done by myself and my friend Jared. Please be kind, this is his first time voice acting. ;)
Incomplete, some syncing issues, shows promise
A very good premise, though the voice and animation do seem to have issues with syncing. Its rather annoying when your subtitles are an entire sentence ahead of your actual speech, or a sentence behind. Also, the plot abruptly ends without hinting at a sequel or at least ending the current storyline. Having episodic storytelling typically means having mini-plots stored over the course of your overarching story, each with an introduction, climax and end of their own. I'd give you more points if those issues were resolved :)
I liked the look of this! Your drawings and animations were nicely done and freshly original. I hope to see more from you.
A short film about a park bench
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