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Well this was a long project to make, considering im new to flash (compared to some), and testing out my graphics pad skills... it obviously needs work. But enjoy the "G rated" splender *sigh*.
Honest feedback would be appreciated.
Many thanks to some of the authors of music i used... sadly i can't remember them atm. but in time ill update this with them.
Well, first of all, where is ur preloader? :P
yeah, that really bugs me, but nvrtherless, the story seems interesting, animation can be better and also the drawing a bit choppy to me...
try improve on timing... good luck! :D
Although you are new to flash, but with long projects like you must always have a preloader. You should know but you can download the Newgrounds preloaders in the Newgrounds downloads. Just download the .fla file and then follow the instructions of what to do. Overall, your animation was beginner-ish, so keep trying hard and always do your best. Good work.
HBO starts targeting children!
What place? Earth!
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