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Short But Funny

Score:
rated 1.84 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
Tags:
funny
action
stick
fighting

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Uploaded
Aug 30, 2010 | 8:23 AM EDT

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Author Comments

Hello newgrounds, I've recently been using Flash CS3 more, and finally started using my bamboo tablet, and found the love for Flash I had once found before, this is just a starting up animation and took me about 3 hours to make, please give me constructive thoughts on how I might improve my animation. Thanks a bunch !

-Doughnut

Reviews


GanoZ-200GanoZ-200

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

We all start somewhere.

The effect u used shows promise. All you need to do is extend into a full fight sequence. I would like to see what you can come up with.


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VeryBigDoughnut responds:

thank you (:


Lancelot317Lancelot317

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Hmm..

I think it's important to stay humble... meaning that it's sort of on the presumptious side to call your own flash funny.. - once you submit a flash, that's for the Newgrounds community to decide.

The flash itself, other than being short, was pretty good. Great effects.. and it would have been funny if it was just slightly longer.. and maybe showed the dude creeping up on his kill rather than starting right next to him.. because that small detail changes the entire context - you know?

If you can make a whole flash with these styles of sound and effects, you'll be fine.. keep it up.


VeryBigDoughnut responds:

Thanks!!! This is why I submitted this flash to hear your criticism ! Thanks, (:


NardilNardil

Rated 2 / 5 stars

A good start

A good start to flash animation. Better than I could do. Though the "funny" part of the title was misleading. (It wasn't actually funny)


VeryBigDoughnut responds:

Sorry i shouldn't have put it there


HazeStigmaHazeStigma

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not really funny but...

Your animation shows promise, i liked the effects with the punch and your backgrounds, now you just need to make longer flashes!

6 for effort!


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VeryBigDoughnut responds:

Thanks someone aculatly read the description?