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Sheriff Bot confronts One Eye, the most dangerous outlaw in the robo west.
This was my final piece entry into the TOFA 2010 flash tourny which i eventually won.
Though not as good as "Bear Bear" (to me and a few others) it still holds its own for 18 days work.
Big thanks to my Voice actors, Skark and Tomamoto for helping out on my entries for the past 3 months. It's been a blast working with you guys~
*Edit* Front page and daily first~ Thanks for the continuing support Newgrounds!
Great aesthetic appeal
However I think the plot was lacking. I liked it, and tried to get into the plot more, but parts of it just seemed cliche and the ending left a lot to be desired. Other than that the music and visuals were stunning, so good overall (especially for only being done in 18 days) but I think if you had had more time to work on the plot and hadn't had to worry about contest deadlines this could have been truly spectacular. Nonetheless, I liked it.
Tarboy killer. Great job. Did the robot thing well.
Since the visual and audible experience was amazing, I had no issues there. The voice acting was great, the sound effects top notch. The writing of the story was a little bumpy. Most of writing a story is a process of revealing information. I liked how you chose to not reveal the item that was passed down until the end. Maybe that item could be better related to the story, or made more clear if it was related. Maybe something related to One Eye's past. Since the story was engaging up until the end, it was a little let down, but that's a compliment to the rest of it, which was together.
pathetic ending though. Although I do feel like you have a lot building for a sequel however. And P.S. im with you Deharke. Tarboy was much better.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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