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This is just a short
Redharvest does a voice cameo as the main villain
This is almost like a demo for what I want my Omega series to be with updated drawings and better animation. I really liked how it turned out.
wish u woulda mentioned there was a fight scene - i would done some fighting noises!
Hah thats ok man, wasn't that big of a fight
Let me know if you wanna do another one
Well, Ive seen a few of your other pieces and they are all the same really...
I think you should work on your animation skills for a start, As a lot of the moves weren't fluid enough.
You dont add enough changes to each character when they move either, as you simply move a single limb rather than the whole body which would happen in turn.
You also use gradient backgrounds too much, they look terrible in my opinion, Try adding a little more detail, like shading or something..
One of the henchmen on the boat too, His fringe was all over the place, I know what you were trying to achieve but it was way to jerky. Also, if you were going to show it was windy, wouldnt it move more than just his fringe?
The plot is simple and understandable, and the voices arent too bad on a posotive note though.... I hope you will take what I say and try to improve on it, because every one of your animations has the same flaws.
All in all, its okay, but needs a lot of work to get your animations running smoothly...
thanks for the tips
yeah your right these things need alot of improvement
thanks for the comment
Pretty good, when it comes down to it...
There was some decent animation in there (albeit at times a bit jerky) and some more than decent voice acting. The story (what little was present) was vaguely interesting and it kind of left me wanting more.
Make it a full movie with some animation adjustments and you'll have a winner, or at least something like it.
3/5 and 7/10; keep it up. I'd actually give it a 7.5/10 if I could.
glad you liked it :)
But not brilliant, sorry
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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