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epic flash I made. constructive criticism please. please use * for swears in reviews because my parents might watch this
hahahah to funny!!!
Pretty good and cool-looking text movement.
However, the movie loops automatically. You could put stop();
actionscript on your work.
I'm gonna branch off like the rest of the reviewers and agree with miniviper - this was pretty funny. However, I'm not going to be so gracious as to give you a 10 because I think we both know it wasn't THAT good.
Here's the thing, bud.. I think you should try this again.. because it was fairly funny and tastefully random. The only thing is, use more color, add background features.. starting with a background. And try to grab a mic and incorporate some voice acting to execute your jokes..
Also, take your time.. so that the animation itself flows well and isn't as sketchy. There's no rush to pop out these submissions.. you could make something really quality if you just slow down the process a bit.
Also, add a menu - don't loop it.
But still. As I said, you get a 4/10 because some of the jokes were great and your music selection was funny..
Also, people on Newgrounds can be harsh - but you should take it for what it is.. as a sign that you're not producing your best quality work yet, but you'll get there. Don't get discouraged!
I personally thought this was funny. Nice job!
It wasn't that good. For a first try, maybe. But I didn't enjoy watching it.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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