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Aug 28, 2010 | 9:12 PM EDT

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epic flash I made. constructive criticism please. please use * for swears in reviews because my parents might watch this

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DimpDimp

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 29, 2010

hahaha

hahahah to funny!!!



qwereeerqwereeer

Rated 2 / 5 stars August 29, 2010

Funny

Pretty good and cool-looking text movement.
However, the movie loops automatically. You could put stop();
actionscript on your work.


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Lancelot317Lancelot317

Rated 2 / 5 stars August 29, 2010

Fairly Funny

I'm gonna branch off like the rest of the reviewers and agree with miniviper - this was pretty funny. However, I'm not going to be so gracious as to give you a 10 because I think we both know it wasn't THAT good.

Here's the thing, bud.. I think you should try this again.. because it was fairly funny and tastefully random. The only thing is, use more color, add background features.. starting with a background. And try to grab a mic and incorporate some voice acting to execute your jokes..

Also, take your time.. so that the animation itself flows well and isn't as sketchy. There's no rush to pop out these submissions.. you could make something really quality if you just slow down the process a bit.

Also, add a menu - don't loop it.

But still. As I said, you get a 4/10 because some of the jokes were great and your music selection was funny..

Also, people on Newgrounds can be harsh - but you should take it for what it is.. as a sign that you're not producing your best quality work yet, but you'll get there. Don't get discouraged!


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miniviperminiviper

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 28, 2010

Awesome

I personally thought this was funny. Nice job!



F-Minus15F-Minus15

Rated 0 / 5 stars August 28, 2010

Well,

It wasn't that good. For a first try, maybe. But I didn't enjoy watching it.