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Aug 25, 2010 | 12:45 PM EDT

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This is my first animation using flash ever. It was for a school project so there is not swearing or violence and that sort of stuff sorry. If you got some constructive feedback I'd love to hear it. One of the songs used was done by lazymuffin.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not that bad

I have seen worse than this as a first flash animation. But the thing that made lol is the way the dad fell into the cart. It's like the cart was eating him.

TheHetman responds:

haha thanks but i did that because i had no time to animate him falling normally :P


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not Bad

The Dad's Hitler-ish mustache threw me off a bit. LOLOLOL. But seriously, good flash. I could hardly hear the characters talk though, so I took a few points off the review. Keep it up.

TheHetman responds:

theres actually alot of people where i live that have staches like that :P. Thanks for the point about the sound


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I bet you've seen lotsa tuts. I didn't know how to make tweens in my first animation. Yeah, you have to speed up the framerate, and use more movieclips (make the water move, wind through the trees). But it's very good for your first video.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Quiet good for a first time

It's quiet good for a first time ;3
but for the movies upcomming, search funnier situations ;3

Oh, and... the voices... XD
Record or search over the internet voices! Real voices! Not this bear-voice lol


TheHetman responds:

Yea i know about the voices, the mike i have is cheap and old. Also i'm not good at using audacity. Also I couldn't really speak all that loud cuz i had to do this at 3 in the morning. Thanks for the comment :)