crap is crap
that not long and the explosion is to fast is crap
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Yepp I Got Super Bored And Made An Animation!
The Idea Is Kinda Lame But I Haven't Submitted Anything In A While And I've Just Started Up Again
I've Gotten Rusty With Flash So It'll Probably Be Abit More Poorly Animated Than Usual xD (which isn't saying much)
I Hope You Guys Enjoy It Though :D
HEHE
WHEN TEH BOOMER ASPLODED YOU HAS TO HAS SAID THE DEMOMAN THING (TF2) KABOOOOM!!! THAD BE EPIC UMAD
decent but
ummm ya i get that its a short but 1 drawings are poor 2 animation wus so so 3 it wus a little too short with no plot or anything and it wusint that funny i meen that idea could of been a riot but i meen no text or anything
BatdanTheDarkKnight responds:
I Shall Work On My Drawings & Everything. Thank You For Taking The Time To Look At The Idea And Not Just The Animation. Hopefully With Practice They Will Get Better :D
Thanks Again.
hmm
Don't be afraid to spend some time on it next time. I guess I'm a jackass I didn't really even think the idea was that funny, but beyond that just from an animation standpoint spend time on the drawings, especially if you're just going to tween everything (which I wouldn't recommend you do).
Don't let it get you down though, just keep working at it you'll get there!
At least its not a Stick fight or madness rip off, right?
BatdanTheDarkKnight responds:
Yeah I Think It Could Have Been Better If Pulled Off Nicer. But Yeah My Animation Skills & Drawing Isn't Exactly Great Right Now. So This Is What You Could Say Is Part Of Practice. Thanks For Your Constructive Crit =D
It was OK
I felt it ran on a little longer than it should have, like the scene when they're walking through the hallway. . . you could of cut that down by 4-5 seconds at least and plus the boomer scene could of been cut down by at least 2 sec.
All in all it was poorly animated and the sound just kinda ruins what little there is too find any enjoyment in this short; You hardly put much time into your drawings as well, either that or you suck at drawing.
BatdanTheDarkKnight responds:
I Agree The Corridor Scene Was A Few Seconds To Long, But The Boomer Scene Was To Add Awkward Moment. I Guess It Didn't Show Properly.
The Sound Effects Were A Quick Job I Didnt Really Have Time To Get Good Sounds.
And The Animation Will Hopefully Improve With Practice This Was Me Getting Back Into The Swing Of It. Only With Practice Can I Get Better At The Drawing. Hopefully Next Time It'll Be Better =]