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Made by me with the help of my brother.
My brother has been teaching me animation he this week wanted me to focuse on lipsyncing. :)
Please don't vote harshly, this is my second animation EVER!
I was lmao all over the place. it was kinda gross. but holy cow katie your good for a second try :D
~ Tyler (sabrewyng)
To be honest, before you make anymore animations you have to get a better program. One that is quite good and I think is for free is "Audacity." If you get that program your animations will be alot better.
Also there was nothing flash about this animation. You need to create a better script as well. All this one was about was a horse saying it needed a crap and that was pretty much it.
I am not trying to be mean about all this, but if you follow this you will see an improvement.
Another thing is that it needs more movement. The whole way through was just lips movement. Make an episode where they run around the place or something.
Anyway, it is quite good for a first timer. Hope you do well
i totally can relate, the fat one reminds me of my race horse ) :
nothing really happened in it that was interesting, it is decent for a second animation while your still learning but it doesnt really have anything to make it pop
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