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It's my 1st normal movie... Please don't be strick.
not bad for a first
but a few problems:
1: makes no sense... whats with the water at the end? i cant understand anything thats going on here...
2: the aniamtion was alittle choppy,
3: make a more obvious play button, how am i supposed to know you had to click the sword? no one told me. in fact, i was just about to write a review saying: "its a freaking sword, whats the big deal? its a picture" next time, just write "play" on the sword...
Don't kill me for sayign this, but that was adorable!
Has its flaws
It was not the worst thing I have ever seen, but it was still fairly bad. I think the weakest point is that you do not have much going on, or the stuff that does go on is pretty poorly animated. It was really too short to fully enjoy. I guess this would have worked better if it was a preview or something like that. There is just so little to say about a submission that really has so little in itself. I can tell that this was your first submission and at least it managed to have a higher rating than my first one.
for a first its good
first a first video not too shabby
the graphics could have been a little better, and there was only a very very basic and vague plot even for a first it could have been better but hey everyone needs to start somewhere!
just keep trying =)
That wasn't bad for a first movie. Keep it up dude.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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