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I've spent last 14 days working on it, it is not as good as I thought it will be I guess I just need to learn a little more about film making.
Most of these ideas I got when I was watching the movie in the cinema and when I was telling people what should have happen (because I was kind of disappointed by Predators).
Pretty good for 14 days of work.
The animation is good and how did I know you would use Morpheus?
good movie dude
the animation may have been abit slow but apart from that you did a great job, some good jokes and good animation.
keep up the good work
I think you did a fairly good job. I liked it. If you'd like constructive suggestions, I'd say for better comedic effect, add more quick, almost-too-fast-to-hear sound effects. Like "sproing!" or "BUZZ!" or "ding-ding!" - tiny things like that at just the right moment to highlight a character's expression or the ridiculousness of the situation can really add to the humor. Also quick scenes here and there - like a very fast, almost-too-fast-to-see shot where you back up from the scene & show the preadtor right behind the guy, wearing a tutu. Not too much, of course - that would be too corny. But it would elevate the humor just a bit. Even so, I liked it fine as-is, so these aren't critiques, just ideas on how to get more of the mood I think you were shooting for. :-)
You are totally right, this animation is boring without these elements, I didn't see what is missing there, but when you wrote this it is so obvious, in my next animations I will use these things, definitely the sounds. Really thank you!
animation was good but the jokes were very bad
lets face it, animation wasn't that good either, it was mostly moving with background, I promise you I'll be better, actually check my new things, maybe you'll enjoy them more. Thanks for watching!
it culd have been alot better, bt overall its ok. couple funny scenes, but...... eh.
but keep going, dnt give up yet. :P
yeah I know what you mean, basically the ideas would work, but delivery is poor, I need to work on my style, thanks :)
A short film about a park bench
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