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Aug 23, 2010 | 8:08 AM EDT

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I've spent last 14 days working on it, it is not as good as I thought it will be I guess I just need to learn a little more about film making.

Most of these ideas I got when I was watching the movie in the cinema and when I was telling people what should have happen (because I was kind of disappointed by Predators).



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Pretty good for 14 days of work.

The animation is good and how did I know you would use Morpheus?


Rated 5 / 5 stars

good movie dude

the animation may have been abit slow but apart from that you did a great job, some good jokes and good animation.
keep up the good work


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not bad.

I think you did a fairly good job. I liked it. If you'd like constructive suggestions, I'd say for better comedic effect, add more quick, almost-too-fast-to-hear sound effects. Like "sproing!" or "BUZZ!" or "ding-ding!" - tiny things like that at just the right moment to highlight a character's expression or the ridiculousness of the situation can really add to the humor. Also quick scenes here and there - like a very fast, almost-too-fast-to-see shot where you back up from the scene & show the preadtor right behind the guy, wearing a tutu. Not too much, of course - that would be too corny. But it would elevate the humor just a bit. Even so, I liked it fine as-is, so these aren't critiques, just ideas on how to get more of the mood I think you were shooting for. :-)

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PrivateJoker152 responds:

You are totally right, this animation is boring without these elements, I didn't see what is missing there, but when you wrote this it is so obvious, in my next animations I will use these things, definitely the sounds. Really thank you!


Rated 3 / 5 stars


animation was good but the jokes were very bad

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PrivateJoker152 responds:

lets face it, animation wasn't that good either, it was mostly moving with background, I promise you I'll be better, actually check my new things, maybe you'll enjoy them more. Thanks for watching!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


it culd have been alot better, bt overall its ok. couple funny scenes, but...... eh.

but keep going, dnt give up yet. :P

PrivateJoker152 responds:

yeah I know what you mean, basically the ideas would work, but delivery is poor, I need to work on my style, thanks :)