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For the last time I shall submit this as a finished product, not anymore a WIP! (happiness!)
The story has already developed and i wish the ending is conductive for the succeeding episodes.
A note on the last part. I messed up something and as a result some territories appear suddenly out of proportion . . . I shall be working on it if time permits, to polish the bugs out.
I purposely left out the explanation in this commentary but there's just one request i would like to make. please, no political statements about WW2 era nations....
BTW the intro has crappy graphics - i was too lazy to make better drawings and for comparison's sake i left them behind. hehehehe
The thing is.. the animation was great, as was the action and energetic feel. I think you got all those aspects down packed. The issue I have is with the voice acting.. I just feel like it was a whole lot of mumbling. More over, the overall plot.. it was just muddled and confusing. There was a lot going on in almost every scene, too much to be able to fully understand what was happening.. and the dialogue that took place at the very end was extremely deep and I liked it a lot but its execution really detracted from the overall presentation.. Still, great work. I liked the dog fight scenes, very fun.
it's supposed to make you feel confused .... for now. . . there are 3 or 4 episodes coming up to clarify things up.... and yes, i am working on "polishing" the voice acting.
I realy want to gun an airplane down now.... 10/10
All that energy in the movements of the planes diving and shooting and getting shot up sets this cartoon apart from everything else. Wasn't sure about the geopolitics at the end, but I did enjoy the moral inquiries in the minds of the three characters at the end. Sweet, man.
A short film about a park bench
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