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Aug 21, 2010 | 3:14 PM EDT

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This is the first episode of my series. As you can see, I tried to get away from the tedious collecting powerful objects thing that everyone is doing. I DID NOT RIP OFF SONIC COLORS BECAUSE THIS WAS RELEASED WAY BEFORE COLORS, and the fact that Sonic Colors uses my 5 generator concept is a monster (and REALLY UNFAIR) coicidence. Anyway, This took me less time to do than ep.0, and that one is shorter than this one.......? I don't know. Maybe because there wasn't a battle scene in this ep. If anyone has seen ep.0, you would know that I have GREATLY improved my text quality. That's a plus. I tried not to tie the episode down with the unnecessary crap. I wanted to get the plot known as quickly as possible. The sooner the action and adventuring starts the better. Guys be sure to rate and comment and I won't have to take off my belt lol. Anyway enjoy the movie an rate generously lol!

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shihan-PKshihan-PK

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 22, 2010

Interesting

I like your story. You are thinking of something a little more original, which is much harder to do in this day and age. Also, you have a pretty good idea of how sprites work and how to get them to move fast and fluid.

There were two problems I had with it.
1) You need more cinematics. In other words, no more scenes where the characters are just standing around doing nothing. Sure, there may be some movement in between, but it's the same camera angle and just about the same character potisions. Try playing around with different angles to try to tell the story a little better. You did an "okayish" job of it before in the first few scenes, but it lacked on the last one.
2) I am not a fan of the writing. Waaaay too many references to other things, both in the dialogue and in the toad's sleeping mutters. Keep the text fresh and write well rather than relying on other things to fill up your dialogue boxes. Another thing while I am talking about the writing are the sexual references. I didn't mind them too much, and it definitely doesn't overpower the main dialogues, but maybe you could chill out on those just a little? I wouldn't mind one scene in each flash that made sexual references; it's just one of those things that can get out of hand really quickly.

Another thing I would have said to improve on is the fighting, but this is more of an intro rather than a fight sequence. I'm looking forward to seeing how you will do with episode 2!

6/10, 3/5.

~shihan-pk~


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canadiansaiyancanadiansaiyan

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 22, 2010

Good start...

Well you've got a good start there, I'm definatly interested to find out where the story goes from here even though I missed much of the dialogue because it went by so fast. You might want to consider putting in a means so the viewer can advance the text, maybe a button or a keystroke.


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LukeyBRLukeyBR

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 22, 2010

Reminds many things!

That ice part looks like Chrono Trigger, and Schala *-*

Still, 100 years, huh? That was pretty original. And my series also have powerful items... too bad T_T'

Great movie, at all. Still, you should give a try to mooore animation, got it?


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teejay-number13teejay-number13

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 22, 2010

I like where this is going.

I agree with darkiway. You have so many options that I'm eager to see, like new allies, maybe descendants, etc. Looking forward to finding out.


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akelkokakelkok

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 22, 2010

Well Done

Liked this episode as well as the other one, good job and all.
Looking forward to the next episode.


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