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Interactive movie clip. Created by Helg for CartoonValley.
you just need some voice actors, because the computer voice just destroys the whole effect and takes from your great artwork.
i love the movie but wtf is up with the voices fucked it up for me souned like a animal crossing game mixed with yoshis island getting fucked lol
Very, very funny!!!!!!
But could use some improvements:
Sound: 1/4. It's got some, but the voices were very unprofessionally done. Fix the voices and get some music for a 4.
Animation: 2/4. Animation is fairly well done, although it gets a little clunky and some of the colours slip up in some scenes. Smooth up the animation and make sure the colours stay the way they should for a 4.
Other: 1/2. For the most part, this is really creatively done; It's been a long while since I've seen something like this. The biggest problem I had with the style was when you'd go to the next frame, the first would continue its sound and animation. This was fairly distracting. Fix this for a 2.
For the most part, this was well done, but some issues need to be addressed before I can give this a 10.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
don't see stuff quite like this here. its a nice change of pace. almost got me to visit your website too. but...not quite.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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