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okay its my first flash submission well my first flash I submitted
so please dont blam I worked hard on this
Short But Sweet
It was pretty good. Nice job!
for a first submision that was great no one should blam this 10/10 5/5
I think you have some real potential here. Though I had to strain really hard to hear what Bowser was saying.. You should probably switch up the sound settings or maybe some neatly written subtitles. I was happy to see that little toad get what he deserved at the end.
It's a good first submission
The flash is pretty good overall. One problem is the music overpowers Bowser talking. I suggest you tweak that. The speech bubbles could have had a bit more work done on them to make them more appealing or even removing the speech line would improve appearance (cause who doesn't know toad says "the princess is in another castle"). The Gangsta Goombas are a nice addition too. Nice work.
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