Meh
The first one was funny and the way Mario's clothes came off like that actually caught me by surprise. It was all downhill from there. Also, I don't know if you realize this but on the "scene selection" it only goes to scene 3.
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this is a remake of my original preview (http://www.newgrounds.co m/portal/view/413591). i have leart more techniques on Flash now, and have made MAJOR changes.
Before, my submission had bits of SMB3, SM allstars: SMB3, and SMA4:SMB3. It's now purely Super Mario Advance 4: Super Mario Bros. 3
so, after the upgrade, i am still currently working on this submission, and will post it hopefully before christmas 2010. hopefully. with college, careers and coursework, i hope i can finish this.
***Important info.***
The scene selection is being finished, but still works.it displays scene 1, 2 and 3 (but no back button yet).
"Contact" and "Extras" do not currently work yet, and scene 5 is unfinished.
During the bonus scene, it unwillingly plays mario's voice as a cluster of noise (still working on that)
There will be six scenes including the Bonus scene (included in this flash). i hope you enjoy :)
Oh, and P.S, this is more of a demo than a preview. i don't understnad why my other preview (http://www.newgrounds.co m/portal/view/413591) got lotsa '10's despite the facet that it had the exact same storyline, worse graphics: colour, shape and size; music, and graphics (eg Scene 2 in the original had sma4 smb3 warp zone in, while yoshi was in smb3 for the NES)
**'m gonna post-pone continuing with this flash simply because i feel de-motivated, and have too little time to edit it these days :/**
marksmithwas12 responds:
oh no! what's wrong after that scene? did you see the original first?
Sorry but I didn't get it?
You should improove the script of your movie! Think a little more before animating and being more original.
marksmithwas12 responds:
it is original. it's just a major update to the last preview i poseted here whcih for some reason got lots of '10's
This is a preview?
It feels more like a rough draft of what your working on. I like the scenes so far, but don't call it a preview if your showing everything you have done already. A preview should be clips of funny parts from the final draft
marksmithwas12 responds:
like i said in the description, its a remake of my original preview, and has some MAJOR changes
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