Too bad you won't finish it.

I really rather liked it. Just one critique on a technical aspect - it looks like you might have used tweening for the head-turns - i.e., it looks like you drew the head facing left, the head facing forward and the head facing right, and used tweening to transition from these three positions. While it's still a great little flash, those particular scenes were a bit awkward as the head shapes morphed and distorted between phases. If that's something you would want to fix, you really wouldn't need to draw every single frame, just two more frames for a quarter-turn left and quarter-turn right. Tweening between 5 frames instead of 3 would go much more smoothly.

Just a suggestion. As you say this is old, you may well have already improved beyond that, which if so, then never mind the advice and good job! :-)

Shame on you, sir

Shame on you for developing a story that if somebody else had written, would probably be gay. But some stories aren't meant to truly end, so.

10/10

WOW

I was really getting into the story. It has something that other flash videos don't-emotion. This is a very good video but to bad you stopped working on it.

it was good.

Hey i can understand it being a drain but maybe you should just write the story make it a book or a novel hell even a short story, even put the basic plot of it on some site where someone else might finish it, Either way i enjoyed.

A shame...

...that you don't wish to continue this. I this would have had great potential. I think that you should, maybe, give it another shot...