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Took a bit of time to make, and I think I've gotten better at animating compared to the crap I've submitted (and had blammed).
I hope all will enjoy. Too bad youtube is being such a butt to me and my uploads. I upload to youtube for general comments, but I upload to newgrounds for critique.
Inspired by the artist, Scott Ramsoomair, this is my attempt at animating one of his comics. Most of it is traced, no duh. I tried animating this as much as possible without using any tweens.
original comic: http://www.vgcats.com/com ics/?strip_id=141
An Admirable Effort!
The animation followed the original comic quite loyally (although I was expecting to see Leo's gran exit from the stall to be different, you know the pee flying everywhere), which brought about great laughs. The extended ending was also well played. The voice acting I feel needs to be improved quite a bit, not to mention the editing of it to cancel out the "recorded" sound and to give it a more natural feel.
All in all, I found it to be a fantastic animation and a good laugh, unless Scott Ramsoomair says otherwise, I say keep the VG adaptations coming!
Thanks for the advice. I did do the flinging pee, although I didn't do it as noticeably as I should have done. I was just being impatient, and that's a folly most amateur animators fall into. but i do this for fun, so no biggie right?
could use some tweaks but otherwise awesome! :D
I liked the idea and the voices were good but the backgrounds were pretty meh...still I'd love to see more! :D
yeah, most of the stuff from the comic was dumbed down for my use, considering i'm not much of an artist.
I liked it... kinda...
I thoroughly enjoyed the animation you did and the ending was pretty good.
The voice acting not as good though. I felt that some times the tone of voice wouldn't be appropriate to the situation. It's not really your fault I'm a fan of this other people's voice acting who do these VG Cats comics so I think I can never like anything other than their voices... sadly... :'(
Other than that it was amazing.
i think the writing was bomb but the acting sucked.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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