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Aug 12, 2010 | 9:36 AM EDT

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My platformer game demo this is only a demo
I am working on the full game :)
Please give me some constructive criticism as this is my first flash Game
Hope you enjoy :D

Reviews


LKIcemanLKIceman

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

tis cool

but mt eden doesnt suit it



Left4DeathInFireLeft4DeathInFire

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Well...

This has potential to be great and I have also seen the tutorial on youtube where you got this from and I have benefitted from it as well but, maybe you should make some original character designs and backgrounds, Don't just follow the tutorial word for word.



DracoFreezeFlameDracoFreezeFlame

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

not half bad

some suggestens are...
1. make it so you are not gonna be damaged a few seconds after you get hit.
2. make enemys, not just natural hazards.
3. make it so you have to jump from one platform to another.
4. the ice should make you slide.
5. make items which are the value of multiple coins


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link209163link209163

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It's still in Beta.

It's good you said this is a demo, because it's not ready. I think you need a lot of work before this is ready for Newgrounds or just the internet in general. The controls are in need of work, music and it's controls are in need of work. I will give you props for having a loading bar.



BubbaTheLoveSlaveBubbaTheLoveSlave

Rated 2 / 5 stars

keep trying

i don't know how to score this but 2 bugs

1 if you jump left when you first start nothing happens no death nothing
2 when i was landing on platforms it would make me do a double jump for no reason