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2 stick figures, codenames "Mangudai" and "Infiltrator" fight to the death for their freedom in a castle while a mysterious stranger watches from the shadows...
Not bad. I don't think this deserves to be at the bottom of the Portal. The animation is pretty decent and smooth, for the most part. I don't really like how you used the line tool for it, it gives it a sort of chunky, blocky look.
There seemed to be more reliance on basic Flash gradients than I'm comfortable with, and a lot of the backgrounds are really simplistic, and are only one color for the most part. I feel that this could be much better if the art and animation was polished a bit.
Decent for a stick figure animation. I like the music and sound effects, the backgrounds are also done quite well. It's strange that you used the line tool to animate your actual stick figures; I'm impressed that the animation was as smooth as it was given that you didn't just use the brush tool. To be honest, my animation would probably look about the same if I were to try and use the line tool too.
You could stand to have a bit more easing and frame-by-frame effects in your animation, but I've seen a lot worse on this site. I feel like you could be a legit animator if you just used the damned brush tool.
Meh not that bad does deserve a better score
Yay constructive criticism, blah blah blah.
Work on your frame count. typically, you need a lot to make high quality flash movies, but be careful of overdoing it. It's worse to not be able to view the creation than having it slightly choppier. ok, but too short and flighty. frame count is the bigget issue. Good idea though.
not too bad
the fight scene was ok
it needed some work but it was still pretty good with the detail
it just needed a bit more work is all
yeah but being lazy keeps me down
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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