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Aug 8, 2010 | 11:58 AM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place August 9, 2010

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So here's Hellami episode 2. Episode 3 will be made and maybe a game too if all things go well. I hope that when you guys see the next episode, you will see improvement in all areas.

*Read the reviews. There are really good ones and really bad ones & i respect all of them except for the ones that accuse me of something that i didn't do. :)

Enjoy. Thank you for the frontpage :)

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astardastard

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 17, 2010

rly

u used the term "scary" god man dig a little deeper seriously and dude below me huge reviews dont make u any less retarded alright get a clew

but still 10/10



TransparentPresenceTransparentPresence

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 14, 2010

Nice :)

Not bad, reminds me of alot of different vampire-based animes. At least I'm a bit happy you're not romanticising vampires. :)
In terms of technicalities, your animation was great, I like the sketchy-realistic style, although I think it still needs improvement, at times the animation seemed to fail the 'realistic' feel, particularly at the times when we encountered the vampire. I do not see anything wrong with the voice acting, but...
This leads to my next point, I think you overdramatised this episode ever so slightly. Because at times your animation was a bit choppy (and your music choice didn't help it) it felt overdramatised and because of that the voice acting felt overdone, and then everything felt overdone. Try to balance. =)
When people say your story-line is repetitive in regards to other vampire animes and films I believe they're being too critical. It's very difficult to be absolutely original in this day and age, so I think the only way you can get achieve a good reaction from your viewers is to make the acting (interaction between the characters) as best as possible.
With that said I sincerely hope you develop the characters more - I think it's very difficult to show a deeply developed character in the first couple episodes of any series, but keep trying. Also try not to make all of them act badass, because that is truly annoying - have a variety of different personalities, it makes the audience take your flash more seriously and keeps them interested. It isn't enough to have good animation - you also need a good plot.
Otherwise this is a good episode. I hope you make another one! I'd like to see where this goes =D



desouzadesouza

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 14, 2010

Interesting

Remind me of Hellsing.
Nice animation.



mychiimychii

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 13, 2010

Nice graphic, but need more effort, overall.

I totally admire the quality of the graphics, but its just not in the right place. There are too many confusing jumps, gives me an uncomfortable to enjoy some of the scenes, especially the ending. And also I don't see why the first sequence should be a climax that needs a flashback, because I don't question myself about anything happen on the present. However, I don't see any problem with the voice acting like anyone else said, even tough it needs a little bit more expressive.

Probably storyboarding, voice acting, and scriptwriting needs to be fixed. You got an extraordinary skills on the graphics, but needs a little more empathy that we want and try to enjoy it too.


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reaven99reaven99

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 13, 2010

i liked it but there are some points

the last punch is that slomotion?
and its to short
more action