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This is my first REAL project. I apologize for the blank space,but atleast you can see it!
LOL!!! XD That smug face!!!!!!!!!!
I really liked how that guy kept getting kicked from game! XD
haha thanks! ill be uploading a trailer for part 2 within the next few hours
it was sort of funny. reused scenes from madness. seamed a bit 'cut and paste'
Lot of potential, but it could use some polishing
This is really cool man. You've got some great animation in there. I'm honored you used my song =). But I'm trying to be constructive here when I tell you that you can do better. Those blank spaces should be filled with something, they're probably one of the biggest cons of this animation. You could also shorten the pauses a bit, or include something that can hold the viewer's attention until the pause ends. Maybe instead of it being it a pause, you could make it in slo-mo. I really like it though. You've got great potential man! You just need to take the time to work out those details =)
Thanks man! part 2 is being made as we speak! and i learned from this movie, make shorter/more interesting pauses,and fill up the blank spaces (which i learned how to make look better now) =)
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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