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An animation about a squid I drew in class one day. Cally isn't the brightest squid. He seems to get into more trouble than he should. Sorry that I didn't get around to making the sounds. I'll put some in next time.
Also, thanks everyone who could have blammed me but didn't
Good, for your first
I think its really cool and very creative, and funny, I chuckled a bit, but it needs some background music, and a background, and maybe if you can come up with a few more characters, make a series. :)
cute
Sound is a must if you plan on making a next one but overall it was okay. The art is clever if you plan on making it funnier and worth it (it doesn't have to be great if it is funny). Honestly laughed when i saw it so good job. maybe a bit more color and a more in depth storyline would have made up for the other parts it lacked.
Clever
I like the clever addition of a thin bar at the side, the same color as the newgrounds background. could be better with sound though
That was actually pretty clever.
I chuckled a bit. However, you need:
sound
better animation (though this was decent)
better art (though others have made it by on less)
Do all of that, and I guarantee you'll have an awesome flash.