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I have to agree with what chimbley said, there was no fault that I found inside of this animation, It reminds me of the good old classic anime! That is something I can really appreciate.
However I strongly Disagree with what HildeBrandt said,
if anything your animation goes as follows.
Length-12 (how many flashes are longer than three minutes now, i love the length!)
and girl on girl? with epically brutal fights?
Win for me. Most definitely.
I only wish you'd been able to add more dialogue to it as It was a wonderful creation.
Your skill in this shines brightly I really hope you continue animating. This has to be one of my favorite flashes.
I enjoyed it.
Only thing i will critic is the sound effects, for the most part they were great, just had a couple repeated sounds that were obvious. Other than that, impressive and better than alot of work on NG. You should work on some new projects and start doing collabs with others. You have plenty of skill. I love the way you made every fight scene fluid. Not many people can achieve that.
Okay, halfway through (-or better, after a really long time of watching) it got boring, so I stopped watching...
Decent fighting animation: 10
Ainme stuff: -3 (seriously, we have seen enough of that.)
Crappy drawing: -2 (shorten your film, improve the quality. It's that easy.)
Too fucking long: -3
Crappy walking- animation: -2
Two women beating the shit out of each other: +3 (That's just always cracking me up.)
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