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I made this animation at college and at home, using flash and photoshop, it is not perfect but i did the best i could with Flash, i am still learning the program. Simple Medieval/Fantasy story of Light and darkness.
Not the greatest but...
you seem to have a basic grasp on audio and animation but there is much room for improvement.
First you could work on your depth, sometimes I had no idea what was in the foreground and the background, second your audio was good but in the battle scene between the knight and dragon I felt like I was watching two puppets go at it. I would recommend having more fluid movements .
Last the artwork was fairly bad but some of the close up scenes such as when the knight was staring down the dragon looked like it could work.
Overall this isn't the greatest but your still learning and you have promise I hope you continue to work and you submit more in the future. 2/5 and 4/10
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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