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it's like the animation can think 4 it's self and your pencil that your drawing him with gets in an epic fight with it and u draw and erase stuff 2 fight each other
Choppy animation, and bad art. Then on top of that..its just tweens...not really much doing. You'll have to improve your art, and make your animations smooth. Thus being, most likely 25, or 30 FPS and for tweens, always ease them.
You can see you are just a beginner, but for a beginner that was really good. Try to speed the frame rate up a bit as well.
Good work, and I would like to see some more.
i posted a second 1
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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