good, needs sound
This is pretty good, it would be better if you could somehow give it some sound, like maybe an effect for the transitions, or a different one for each picture.
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first time using flash, please dont critisize this because it might suck.
wow, came out better review wise than i thought it would.
mreggy responds:
thanks. also for some reason it wounldent let put in a backround/sound when i was working on it. and yes i know how to.
(P.S. Weegee is epic :3)
Not bad
the art is ok, and I like how you were able to make a transactions between each picture. Maybe you can put in a different background, or make one. Just a suggestion, but maybe make a little story to go with each object. such as the teddy bear was found under the bed of a lonely girl who died when a terrible flood came into her house and she couldn't escape.
9/10
4/5
mreggy responds:
good idea. also are you psycotic? no offence if you are.
and hes not a teddy bear, he's a posessd doll that killed a house full of orphans
It's a good idea
You did pretty well on this, but the changes are really to abrupt to give us that feeling of "oh oh oh, what is it going to turn into next?" It doesn't have the excitement to hold interest. That's all, although next time you might want to make it longer as well.