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draft, no music yet
thanks for the reviews, I'm currently working on the animation. vCam isn't working well in cs4, so I had to redo it. I'm thinkin about cuttin them up and make them move, haha. The opening is still not done.
dude below me
slifer and obilisk aren't really Egyptian gods. oh yeah. the flash. it has accurate info, but bomkosh is right. this really has no business being on newgrounds
I learned everything from yugioh XD.
Were's oblisk, and Slifer j/k, when I first watched it I thought it was going to be all wrong information but it wasn't, there is actually more gods in the egyption faith but we could be watching for a long time though. Some work is needed to this one, but will give it a good review because it wasn't totally useless.
Since it was a draft I took it easy on Ya
Definitely needs music, and a narrator. I think your text moves too fast, and if you add a narrator, than maybe you could slow the text. Than maybe even some sound effects.
It's informative, but it seems that the animation was a bit lacking. Smoother animation and music, as you said, on the next draft, would make for a better Flash
your facts were accurate. as you said in your description this is a draft. I'm sure when you add music too it i'll be able too make it a little higer then this. You might want too think about making an actual animation involving the egyptian gods though.
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