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I actually made this one as a first episode but deemed it too extreme to release as episode one.
Actual review: INCOMING!
I'm not going to say "This is the worst flash I've ever seen!" cause it's not.
The content itself wasn't amazingly terrible. Crude and inhuman maybe, but i've seen worse. The animation (or lack of it) wasn't the worst I've seen posted on newgrounds.
If this was a serious attempt to start animating in flash, read further. If you just wanted to throw some crap into the fray, then this won't help you.
the sound quality was ok, not incredible, but it works.
As for animation, you need to put some (or a lot of) work into that. You don't need shiny, professional character designs and backgrounds; However, making the characters ACTUALLY animated instead of [still paper cutouts with a floating mouth] would work wonders.
The content seemed to be aimed at being "humorous", but due to the dreary background and stiff facial expressions, comes across only as sick, perverted, and immature (as was said in a review a few hours ago).
That's not to say that it's not sick and immature. But hey, this is newgrounds, where perversion abounds and immaturity is welcome.
You may not have succeeded in gathering a viewer base this time, but no one is good their first time animating.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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