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this flash just plain... sucks.... It just does and thats that. Its an insult to StarWars, i swear!
You shoulllld spend more time drawing the characters. They didn't look so good. And they looked the same. That's not good.
your "idea in progress" really should've been finished up before you submitted this, maybe even a teaser or something. this here wasn't all that great.
DUDE! WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU SMOKIN DUDE! I MEAN SERIOUSELY! HOW TH HEL DID THIS GT INTO THE ORTA YET POOR CONKEY WAS BLAMMED?!? THAT MAKES NO SENSE WHAT SO EVA!!
Okay, here's the problem. In my opinion it ran wayyyy to slow to keep me off my feet. You'll need more small scenes and make them a bit faster. Second, the tweening on everything also went slow, and it was very obvious that it was way too simple and nothing else was moving around. Take your time and draw the characters a bit better, and get some sound effects in there! I have a ton of Jedi Outcast sounds if you need them, so if you want, IM me or email me. As for making the rest, go for it! Oh, and music was great.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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