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Aug 4, 2010 | 4:52 PM EDT

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Hey there. This is my first submission but not my first movie its like my 3rd or 4th. That said its a sprite movie. But if you dont like sprites dont watch or atleast vote fairly. I didnt have voice actors for this episode but I will for the 2nd. Please give constructive critisism and tips on what I can do to make this a better series.
Is it to long to sort? Stuff like that. Thanks.

Watch it on Youtube for better quality (http://www.youtube.com/w atch?v=jpfigF6u6uw)
Watch the second(http://www.newgrou nds.com/portal/view/54726 2)

Reviews


RubberBandasaurusRubberBandasaurus

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 13, 2010

Pretty good.

Add subtitles in your next since not everyone can understand computer speak. For what it is, it isn't bad. Definitely make a second episode. This made me laugh but it was too short. Make future episodes longer.


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SyuleeArbe responds:

Thanks for your review. I'll definatly add subtitles in the next one though I managed to get ahold of voice actors. The script for the 2nd episode is roughly 4 pages long where as this was just 1 1/2.


Quin10Quin10

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars August 4, 2010

uuuuhhhhhhh...

some funny lines, needs more subtitles, the voice is sometimes hard to understand.work on the plot a little, and its not to long or short.


SyuleeArbe responds:

Alright thanks. I also accidently pressed useless when I should have helpful.


MyarbroughMyarbrough

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 4, 2010

Weird! O_O

But i give it a 10!, Also!, How do you use Mac voices?, I tried to make a Mac voiced video!, But i failed!, Send me a reply How!


SyuleeArbe responds:

Wierd like humor wierd? I also sent you a message.


Jordanv78Jordanv78

Rated 2 / 5 stars August 4, 2010

The sprites aren't the problem...

Im sorry, the sprite animation is ok, but the voiceover, and the sound is horrible. It makes it unwatchable.


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SyuleeArbe responds:

You mean the sound the voice over makes? I agree with you if thats the case. Thanks for the review.