Be a Supporter!

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Jul 27, 2010 | 10:55 PM EDT

Author Comments

Woah, I'm finally done with this project!! I've been working on this on and off for four months, and I'm happy to have it completed! :D

The characters that are shown in this flash are my own, and I give credit to the songs that were used to the original creators! This flash is something I did so people like you guys could get to somewhat know some of my characters!

So, sit back and enjoy the show! ;p

Reviews


constermockconstermock

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 28, 2010

i can see you put some time into this

not that bad a 3/5 5/10 but it seems like you have not found that you really want to work at in flash yet give it some time and i bet you will.
keep trying u'll get it ^^ ok


People find this review helpful!
Yun-chan responds:

Thank you for the review! I'm still learning, and one day I know I'll find what I'm looking for in the program! Also, thanks for the support! :3


IdealistIdealist

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars July 28, 2010

wow

you're lucky to get a 1 out of me. this is a piece of doggy doodoo with baked beans on top of it. Stop being a poser and draw your own style. Anime is cool, but dont use flash unless you are really good at it. The music sucks too, choose some j-pop songs next time. I expect to see something amazing in your next flash :]



JA-MEJA-ME

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 28, 2010

"Potential" - and loads of it

To be honest, this review is based on the effort of the author and potential for improvement. From the look of the drawings, it appears you are a very capable manga/anime artist. You appear to be having trouble using the tools in flash to draw them, but you will get used to these.

Animation- Most was low quality, but as a beginner, it still can be fixed in later projects. The lip sync looked (at times) like random shapes rather than the shape your mouth makes (which are almost always standard per type of sound if in the same state of expression). Also, chins and lips tend to move when people talk. The staggered movements reminded me of animations I have seen done entirely in Microsoft paint. For scenes where you look at a still image for more than a movement, try camera shakes and flashes in between images (look at the "school 13" series).

Concept- Original characters lip words form songs with minor plot from their universe. This wasn't great, I have seen it done better, but I still don't like it. Perhaps next time try an "animated comic" (an animation made out of slightly more drawings than a comic book would have using camera effects to add a sense of movement) with music in the background, not the main point.

Drawings/art- This was your strongest point. Mostly well done, but issues with drawing in flash can be seen. If you haven't already, consider investing in a wacom tablet. Some flash programs also let you vectorize images you have drawn in other programs. Practice, practice, practice....

10/10 for effort, drawings, original characters, and gut for doing this (as most people are probably are not going to be as kind)

I hope you could get something out of my first review! I look forward to seeing more of your work.


People find this review helpful!
Yun-chan responds:

Thank you for the thought-out review. I will take the "animated comic" into consideration as that sounds a little easier and probably less time consuming. And you were right, about beginner! I'm still learning the tricks and tools of flash.

Thanks very much for a review, especially your first! :D And I will have more work for sure to put up! ;p


arquisarquis

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 28, 2010

Very good

I applaud you for a good flash. I like how you are putting out your creative works like this, it's actually quite inspiring for me as I wish I had the artistic talent to do something like this for characters I've developed. I won't say it was perfect, but by standard of first posts to the site, it was awesome.


People find this review helpful!
Yun-chan responds:

Thanks very much for your review!


Ace75Ace75

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 27, 2010

Eh.

Prob wont be blamed. I mean the basic art style is fine but the animation and audio quality definitely aren't the best. But it does show you have potential =] We all start somewhere.


People find this review helpful!
Yun-chan responds:

True, true. I know I'll get better in time! Thanks for the review!