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I hope you like this one guys, took me a while. :)
Tankmen belong to JohnnyUtah, hope he doesn't mind me using them!
This has some potential, good job :)
The concept of the story was overall pretty good, but I didn't really get was going on at first. With no voice actors or anything of the sort, I just couldn't really get what the hell what was going on. I finally understood a little bit later.
The artwork need a hell of a lotta work on the living man....or just the characters in general. There shoulder's were way to broadened out for their body size and it looked like it just cut off to their necks. Not to mention the background could've used a little bit more work. I know the entire idea was probably something like sepiatone or black&white, but still. A little more effort would've been appreciated.
Pretty good though.
Overall: 8/10, 4/5.
Yeah, black and white people really is my thing. xD
I rather liked this, even though I wasn't sure what was going on. I can't fairly judge the animation either because it was good at times and bad at others. I felt a strong emotional pull towards this, and I feel good about watching it. The music suits the mood very well, and I applaud you for that. Overall, good job.
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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