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[Edit]: mkay, green highlighty thing, I can live with that! 7th place! whooo!
FEEDBACK IS VERY APPRECIATED
So after a while, I've decided to start animating again. This will serve as a "Re-introduction" to my characters and to flash.
I really hope u enjoy it, and if you do, I will make more (but actually scripted, and funnier!)
Story: There isnt any to speak of, other than slight commentary on how it's hard to entertain the overly-aggressive Newgrounds viewer.
Thanks for watching!
You should keep working on you art style. Voice work is ok. Keep at it.
I just dusted off my keyframes a few weeks ago, so i still have room to get my style down.
Thanks for watching/feedbacking!
OMG u think u deserve feedback from us? almighty reviewers who complain about everything and yet haven't submit anything? don't make me laugh.
anyway i liked it a lot chars are cool nice art and voices. i think the only thing u need is a script to put them in.
lol, yea, maybe i was a little harsh on too general an audience, lol...
Thanks for ur feedback, and for watching. I'm not used to writing scripts, but i will if it'll make ya'll happy!
That was pretty interesting and innovative. I seriously feel like a savage beast right now..im glad i didnt have to blam this or anything.
Hey if you get the chance, can you send some of those super models my way? ?
I'm ssOOOO glad u didnt blam it either, lol... whatever that means, lol
An i'm sorry, only Coolio can summon super models to his sides, it's an amazing talent only he has mastered.
Anywho, Thanks for the feedback/watching!
nice idea, nice humor.
well the animation could obviously be better but you're a beginner, so for your level, it's great, although you could make a better background... the yellow screen is annoying to watch... could made it a house or something...
voice acting wasn't top notch either but still was very nice. needs more work though.
overall: good job, keep it up!
true true, i was afraid i would "overcrowd" the screen, it i added a background, so i kept it simple.
Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep working on it, and hopefully we can do this again with the next episode!
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