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this is a short horror story i did for my english coursework i got a+ (by the way im 15) please review and check my other flash - thanks
ps white screen is loading music
I reed threw it and then at the end it just got wired and scary. i could not come up with something so smart.
kinda good .. needs improvement
good foundation for a greater story
It could be I guess would take some thought though maybee I will take a crack at it :)
The hell was that?
There were several typos and the story wasn't that great or memorable. I like the idea of this, but you could do way better. Nice try though.
Thanks Its not the best I guess but a+ made my day :)
Nice story.... you should make some game stories and sale it xD
I wish lol ... Since I started with flash a year ago the only money I've ever earned was $0.01 from the newgroundsbportal adds (sigh)
not my style
not much i can say i usualy dont play these flashes but it was scary
Thank you no offence to anyone who didn't get it but it takes a fairly high iq level to understand the story you must be one of them :)
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