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Jul 25, 2010 | 1:15 PM EDT

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this is a short horror story i did for my english coursework i got a+ (by the way im 15) please review and check my other flash - thanks

ps white screen is loading music

Reviews


Jamtheman1017Jamtheman1017

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 26, 2010

Deep

I reed threw it and then at the end it just got wired and scary. i could not come up with something so smart.

well done!


neverzonegaming responds:

thank's james


Drags911Drags911

Rated 2 / 5 stars July 25, 2010

meh

kinda good .. needs improvement
good foundation for a greater story


neverzonegaming responds:

It could be I guess would take some thought though maybee I will take a crack at it :)


greenstatic92greenstatic92

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars July 25, 2010

The hell was that?

There were several typos and the story wasn't that great or memorable. I like the idea of this, but you could do way better. Nice try though.


neverzonegaming responds:

Thanks Its not the best I guess but a+ made my day :)


sceareztscearezt

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 25, 2010

Story

Nice story.... you should make some game stories and sale it xD


neverzonegaming responds:

I wish lol ... Since I started with flash a year ago the only money I've ever earned was $0.01 from the newgroundsbportal adds (sigh)


shadestyleshadestyle

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 25, 2010

not my style

not much i can say i usualy dont play these flashes but it was scary


neverzonegaming responds:

Thank you no offence to anyone who didn't get it but it takes a fairly high iq level to understand the story you must be one of them :)