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This is about a stickman who gets killed
Im going to be making a sequel which will show why and how etc
please give me some constructive criticism
This is only my third flash and it took ages
@mariogamer2010 that was harsh and stick animations arent banned from newgrounds there are thousands of high scoring stick submittions and mspaint is not banned either inface 90% of game logos on newgrounds were quickly edited in from printscreen in ms paint including tom fulps ! oh and i see you have submitted art and music but its hard for you to critisize a flash animtion if you have no idea of how mlong it takes to make even a small stick toon so hopefull in your next review youll be more constuctive
anyway i think this submittion was a bit bland but my 3rd flash animation was a few squiggles and a total fail so its not too bad but improvement would be good ~ all the best
really not bad!
to mariogamer2010: that wasn't constructive, but hateful. If you said it to me, I would never make a flash movie again.
I liked the fight, but mariogamer2010 was right, you should make it longer.
For the 3rd time, this i great, but don't forget to finish your work.
I missed the: sounds, backgrounds, more detialed characters, objects.
Keep it up!
That was a "Constructive Criticism". -.-'
just another stickman flash
and a very lousy one at that.
you should seriously improve the length and graphics, half of the time there wasn't even a background. Step up your game.
it was kinda good for your third :)
PAINT? YOU GOT TO BE KIDDING ME! Microsoft Paint?
That is crazy talk, use real flash! MS paint is banned from newgrounds!
Wow, 4 seconds of fighting and about 30 seconds of funeral?
Goal: Add at least 20 more seconds of fighting for a 1
Quality and Quantity: 0000.1/5
You sure put no quality to the fight, but loads of quantity at the funeral?
Goal: Try to even them out for a 1
Sorry stickmen aren't suppost to be on newgrounds, its just another one of there rules, sorry!
Goal: Don't use stickmen
Background design and music: 0/5
At least put some sky, or some sad music for the funeral.
Goal: Don't use ms paint at all, dont use pivot! use a professional animation with original characters for a 1.4
I am not using paint U idiot im using adobe flash cs5
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