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She teached me about flash, so I could make my own flashes. :D
Not to be mean or anything but this one does need lots more effort it was poorly done, first of all the "ITEMS" are too small, and should be bigger, and the canvas should be larger aswell so that you can have more items and larger ones, the "MUSIC" was great but could also be the reason why the loading time took abit longer then usual. You could also use much more items that you had there was just too few of items and needs more then what you have, also be creative with your items make more random stuff, more unique ones aswell. as said before the music was great but you should have it "LOOP" or give the use an option to loop it or stop it. Anyways i had fun with this, the best part was the music, the rest needs lost more effort.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improving on stuff is always a Plus, so here are some decent suggestions on making things better, you should give them a try or atleast a thought. The items were way too smal, you need to make them larger,The screen size was small, you should think about making it somewhat larger, maybe then you can also make more items aswell, a larger screen will allow for more items, and show more quality of those items aswell, give it a try it wont hurt, anyways hope to see improvments soon.Items and accecories are probably the key stuff that really makes up a dress-up game, and seems like your game lacked in alot of them, so i would suggest adding much more items, props and accecories, having some items that were animated somehow would be an extra touch aswell.Backrounds are not a must in these dress-up games, but by putting a lil more effort in them such as, some images and or art graphics, even just some simple scenery would work, but anything would make it better then just a plain palate. As mentioned above, the music was great but you should have it Loop" or give the use an option to loop it or stop it.
She is kind of hot
This does not have that many things that are too unique for a dress up game, so this was okay. Some of the parts were rather interesting, like the tail that seemed to be made of flesh (?). The biggest thing to improve on is how the image itself is too small in resolution. It was nice of you to put that song in it, as a lot of people here forget that. It was kind of weird how the girl was made of pixels but the clothes were a more solid color. Another thing to work on would be the background.
Yeah, thank you for review. You are right in all ways. xD I will improve myself.
Not crisp enough.
It's simply a simple dress up game, you need to put more into it like did set of outfits, different rooms you could be in, skin colors, whatever. The more work you put in the better it looks.
Overall, Great Idea. You just need to take it and grow with it. :]
Thank you. I made another game, and I have put there more scripts. I´m gonna submit it right now. :)
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