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Lol my first animation, enjoy guys.
colour and sound are little of in places, need to fix that, maybe add a preloader and a end to stop it from looping, drawings need toning up a bit, and try not to rush ur animations the longer u take and put dedication in them they will go far on here.
Ok, thanks man.
noticed some colours are off, animations which are rushed wont get a good review try to clean it up please :) other then that it made me lol ^^
thanks ^^, will do.
Could of been quite a nice short
Spend more time cleaning up your animations, your drawings aren't too bad but you'll get better with practice. I noticed his shirt changed colour half way through, and his jaw had stray brushed all over the place.
Ideally the last scene where he's on the toilet, should of been the best drawing because there wasn't much to animation.
Learn basic actionscript such as: stop();
to learn how to create play buttons and preloaders.
I'm trying, but I just sarted animatiing on flash a few days ago and slightly am getting the hang enough, thanks.
Just keep trying to get your art better and also dont loop animations....
How do i not loop my animation?
A short film about a park bench
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