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First flash movie.
First time to make it.
First time to submit it in this here site.
Hope you enjoy.
It's ok but it needs sound.
Duwa Ho! Your Animation is great, considering it's your first attempt to create a flash movie. It really needs sound (it's the same comment that I recieve). Since your freaky poem is so hard to understand I'll give you a 10 for it.
Very open minded I am.
Well seems to me that girl wishes that the world she dreams of a peaceful world I wish that can be true as well but when you character was a little sad that she said she was the sin that she was or something like that made her trun back time or never come to the world. Damn that was great man hope you make a series.
Oh my god, that was so amazing. I totally feel you. I can relate to that poem, and that girl. The person reviewing before me said the poem is Robert Frost, and I'm not sure if it is or not, but if that ISN'T Robert Frost, then you are a beautiful poet. And if it is, then nice tribute, I'm going to the bookstore. PROBLEMS: You DEFINITLY need some music, some classical piano would work nicely. And the text was too light-colored, sometimes I couldn't read it. Thanks, for the inspiration.
sweet dude, work harder to get the effect that you want. for a first timer that was sweet! good luck on other flash projects...
It was Good.
very good graphics and ur drawing is sweet, but it IS boring. You can do a really nice looking Flash next time, make a flash that makes sense.
Overall, it was good.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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