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First flash movie.
First time to make it.
First time to submit it in this here site.
Hope you enjoy.
man it was to slow so i did not watch it all plus it was boring so work on something worth watching entiraly.
sweet dude, work harder to get the effect that you want. for a first timer that was sweet! good luck on other flash projects...
Very open minded I am.
Well seems to me that girl wishes that the world she dreams of a peaceful world I wish that can be true as well but when you character was a little sad that she said she was the sin that she was or something like that made her trun back time or never come to the world. Damn that was great man hope you make a series.
Hey, good work here...
...That was your first flash? Very well done, man. I like your style. I think the fact that its silent lends sincerity to the poem. Look forward to seeing more from you. Good work!
I thought it was very well done, and intresting...though was slow at start...but enjoyed the style of the animation. couple suggestions though.
1. music would do wonders...cause when it's quiet...it makes it dull...even some soft overture, or celtic music, like Enya,...something that would fit the overall theme of the movie.
2. most importantly...the colour of the text and the font. alot of the text was illegable...as the colour ever was simular to the background...or the background colour overpowered the text.
A short film about a park bench
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