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This is my first full flash ever... so rate it on that.
I understand it's not that awesome, but I guess it's entertaining once or twice?
I plan on making several episodes, while trying to get better with each episode.
Really great for a first time, just keep on improving and reading or whatever u can to learn more on art to improve the art of it and audio needs to be boosted a bit because I could hardly hear what the guy was saying.
I have little or no place in Audio editing, but I'll be trying to learn a bit. Thank you for the advice! I'll be referring to all of the reviews so I can make the next one better!
improvement its a thing to strive for
it does seem to leave me hanging as to what the hell its about but I do want to see more... now lets hope that next episodes will look better... good luck! :D
Thanks man, it's a first flash, so it looking good is a bit rare I think. I'm gonna put more work on the BGs, and up the frame rate a bit so it looks better!
you definetly have potential. there are some areas that need work however. for instance you should try having more diversity in the sound clips throughout the flash as well as make sure you're voice acting fits the circumstance they're in. other than that all you need is practice so keep on keepin on
Thanks for the advice! I'll keep everything you said in mind!
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