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Hey everyone, Round 1 done, and made it by one point! Gotta step it up for Round 2, critiques are always welcome!
seems like something my mom wood wach
funny man. the sex is like a batlle feeled i bet and the end was graet.
This is a very good flash
I wouldn't be very surprised at all if this made front page. A good story going on, really good animation, good art, and very good voice dubbing and voice clarity. Many cartoons fail due to the voice being intangible. Anyways, good cartoon.
9/10 4/5 meant to press 5/5
p.s., why idn't the mom have any arms untill the interview? ....Was it really that big?
this was really funny good job!!
That ending about made it!
But it was bogged down by some kind of static dialogue, and it kinda jumoed around. You didn't really cover childhood all that well. And the girlfriend not having a voice was kinda annoying, until her last part. :D
Anyhow, you missed some key aesthetics which I thought would make this better. And it did end to soon. But this holds a lot of promise. So just keep it up, pay more attention to the details and please provide us with even more of those good jokes!
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