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Jul 18, 2010 | 3:39 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is my first ever flash dun dun dunnnnn. My lil bro actually introduced me 2 flash a week or so ago and taught me how to do shiznit in it and this is what came out the other end. I know the animation sucks and pacing is a little drawn out but overall I feel good that I`m actually submitting something I spent quality time working on. I`m also getting better at this.
My bro`s tablet short wired so much of it was done with mouse, I`m sure you can spot the areas.
I hope you enjoy my first of many attempts in flash. I admire those who can sit for hours and animate. My back hurts. Btw, I had no idea i could animate using only tweens until after i made this. Frame by frame is still sweet tho. I hope you enjoy this.
Tis about an angel who falls in love with a Miss Jessica Lovely. It`s not funny tho, some may even say a bit sad. Anyhows, I dunno how 2 compress stuff so sry about the size. Please review, but not too harsh especially if you have never submitted anything. I`ll reply to all. thx.

My lil bro is Kodower i think. Check him out.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

That was..

Very entertaining for your first flash. You put a lot of effort in it. I liked the concept, and it was very sad. I was going to give you and 8/4 because of the graphics, but then I read your comments, so I am giving it a 10/5, since shit happens.

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lonelyandbored responds:

wow thanks alot man. and yeah, shit does happen alot huh.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

amazing for a first flash.

This is spectacular for a first flash. With more work, you could really go places.

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lonelyandbored responds:

Really...i always wanted to go mexico...


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad for a first flash

Though I wasn't a big fan of the concept, the fact that you where able to make a fully animated frame by frame flash this long on your first go is quite impressive. I didn't really like the art style, but at least it wasn't stickmen or something of that nature. One thing you might want to work on a bit is sound direction. I won't go into it too much, because really the only sound here was music, but you might want to experiment with fades or ambient sounds to make scene transitions seem less abrupt and help the flow of things.

Overall, you put some hard work into this, and it shows.

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lonelyandbored responds:

Meh, i hate stick animations. And yeah, i was going for a strictly music based flash but i understand the need for subtle layers of music. thanks for the review, it was much appreciated, as well as the recognition of my tedious work, lol.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Impressive for a first time!

Better than a lot of the crap the more experienced idiots throw up here! Next time, I suggest working in some sound effects (not too loud mind, they shouldn't overpower the rest of the thing) and letting the music fade rather than cut off abruptly. In scenes where there is excessive movement in one direction, like when he was falling or flying, if you scroll the background in the opposite direction of the movement it'll help the viewed follow what's going on better. Looking forward to more from you!

lonelyandbored responds:

Thanks for that in depth review, much appreciated. I will aspire to do all you just stated. Hopefully next time you`ll see a flash by me that you can give a 10.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow, this was your first flash? Nicely done.

Yes, it has problems, which you already recognized, but if this is your first flash I think you'll do well. Looking forward to seeing what else youc an come up with.

lonelyandbored responds:

Thanks alot dude. I really enjoyed your movie "egg" as well as your highly underrated short "Battle of the Balls".