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Jul 7, 2010 | 7:04 PM EDT

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This is part 2 go watch part 1 first http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/541561

My first comic project of this length, It was done within 5 weeks and I didn't wanna do anything too over the top. Don't take the whole thing seriously and if youre looking for something deep or meaningful you wont find it.
It is what it is, I hope some may enjoy it.

Cause of the file size it had to be divided in 2 parts.

Warning: Contains Cartoon Porn, if you are easily offended by that you shouldn't look through it!

-Shadman

Instructions:
Navigate with "Left" and "Right" arrow keys.
"O" to set the current page to his original size.
"R" to fit the current page to the window border.

You can click and drag each page.
You can zoom in/out with the +/- on the number pad.
Its easier to read it you click on the "expand" option.

Reviews


MakakaovMakakaov

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 8, 2010

I like comics

So even if theese are adult ones, i try to find a story in them.

I see the story in here, an Office Worker, with shitty life, tired, and aware of his miserable existance bullied by his boss, or coorowker, or whatever, finally explodes, something crosses the line, or something, and he just kills that guy, and knowing he has not got a lot of time, he realises his sexual fantasy.

I was kinda suprised to see such a low score. Graphics aren't too bad, and there's sex in it, so it kinda prooved good score on NG.

I'm afraid, that there's just not as many sex, as users would like to have, and it's kinda unusual sex. I think that other users are just not very familiar with that, and from what i know, they don't really like rape.

I blood combined with sex doesn't really turn me up, and i personally wouldn't ever put a gun inside a woman. I know, that theese are not said to be your desires, but Jack's, but still interested i checked your art, and found things releated to blood or rape, or both. I'm not saying you're sick, but I believe some people may be even disguised with your work.

But as you titled it, it's a Shite Comic, and i guess you weren't looking for a big success after it.

5/5,
8/10.



DannyPDannyP

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 7, 2010

A good story gone in the wrong direction?

I'm pretty surprised both of these scored so low, part 1 only managing to get 2.8... There are probably hentai galleries of stolen artwork with higher scores. Your art is very good, no doubt about that. Jack's insane thoughts were funny.
You really let us see how that guy got under Jack's skin. Not just see it, but feel it. When I was reading it, I wanted to punch the asshole, myself (well, I wanted Jack to do it since it's a comic). The murder gave him an excuse to finally violate the woman, but I think I would've preferred some kind of horror/mystery thing instead of porn. It did allow for some more humour at the end, though. Anyhow, I think you should maybe try to write a serious story next time... or maybe just one that isn't about rape or other strongly objectionable content.

I liked how you had the panels appear one at a time, but the navigation was a bit of a hassle. When zooming with the scroll wheel, it would scroll the entire Newgrounds page for me. When zoomed in and dragging the comic around, I'd sometimes find myself unable to let go of the comic or I'd accidentally end up clicking the left/right border buttons. I ended up not bothering to zoom in on quite a few pages due to that, so I couldn't appreciate the artwork as fully as possible.


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TheShadling responds:

The programmer says thankyou for pointing the scrolling problem out, he fixed it now.


robocarnagerobocarnage

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 7, 2010

good, with a few shortfalls

the artistic style worked well in portraying the pressure and insanity felt by jack, and the story flowed well in terms of a mindset that many men can identify with. that is the trapped in an office, surrounded by douchebags and unattainable women feeling, not the rape.

in terms of the rape, i felt it came off as a little unnecessary to show the internal ejaculation, as it held no emotional content, and was just sort of a dick in meat.



Neophyte-RoninNeophyte-Ronin

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 7, 2010

Dirt Begets Dirt in Two Parts

After viewing both parts of the comic, I must say those five weeks Shadman used up weren't wasted. He can pull comics off professionally--earn money for what he does--judging by his handiwork here.

To be honest, it is a comic, and a rather debauched one at that. There are stereotyped characters, one-dimensional throwaways that have no place in a far more complex narrative. The antagonist reminds me of the jerk from "Jon of War" by JohnnyUtah, perhaps the inspiration is more than just very direct. It's not a wholesome read, and it is brutal with little moralizing or depth to it.

It will, of course, be rated extremely high thanks to the pornographic content; everybody (except most of the ladies around here) will eat this up. I, on the other hand, appreciate the format and the richness of the artwork, as it is lavish in color and almost cinematic in the frames' sequential display. The drawings are still roughshod, though.

With more discretion in subject matter and a continued emphasis upon the format and colorful artistry, Shadman can definitely continue submitting comics to Newgrounds and possibly help restart the comic book format around here. What's not to like about a pulp rag every now and then? So long as it's not the same old dirt recycled over and over again!



GenericJoshGenericJosh

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 7, 2010

Noice!

Humorous ending, compelling to the Humorous side of death. Guess you could call this a more advanced version of Cyanide and Happiness. Hahah, but great job!

-GJ