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Jul 7, 2010 | 7:04 PM EDT

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This is part 2 go watch part 1 first http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/541561

My first comic project of this length, It was done within 5 weeks and I didn't wanna do anything too over the top. Don't take the whole thing seriously and if youre looking for something deep or meaningful you wont find it.
It is what it is, I hope some may enjoy it.

Cause of the file size it had to be divided in 2 parts.

Warning: Contains Cartoon Porn, if you are easily offended by that you shouldn't look through it!

-Shadman

Instructions:
Navigate with "Left" and "Right" arrow keys.
"O" to set the current page to his original size.
"R" to fit the current page to the window border.

You can click and drag each page.
You can zoom in/out with the +/- on the number pad.
Its easier to read it you click on the "expand" option.

Reviews


RawGreenRawGreen

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 11, 2011

The whole thing

The whole thing truly was horrible, too bad I enjoyed it all up.


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MrGamesAlotMrGamesAlot

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 10, 2011

I love the ending, because....

Throughout the comic I hated the main char more and more :D



valkrion666valkrion666

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 8, 2011

nice job

1 thing that bugged me about this is you broke the laws of phsyicics when the guard was runing into the door from just a piece of wood cramed into the door i would have flown open if he had to pull that would have worked but the plank wasn't wedged or braced by anything realistically it would have given as much time as a "do not disturb" sign little things like this just seem to irk me other than that good job


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expert999expert999

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 8, 2011

hoping for your next better comic!

i can seem to understand what the comic artist want to depict in the first few parts of the story. But surely, many people cant understand what happened in the second best part of the story ... the ending.

.in short, the comic has poor organization of ideas that makes the ending short and unsatisfying



GungaDGungaD

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars January 6, 2011

Good and Not Good

(Please note that this review contains some information that makes it a "spoiler".)

What is good about it is the drawing style and artistry. The clicking through one frame at a time is a novel way of letting the comic unfold. The story is simplistic and formulaic, which isn't a bad thing for a comic. But the way the story unfolds is what separates great comics from average comics like this one.

From what I can tell, the comic is supposed to have shocking and exploitative content, so one shouldn't be too surprised as the story unfolds and becomes more violent. But when I read through this I couldn't help but think about 1950's horror comics, and there is one way in which they suceed in telling a good story that this comic fails: most of the "horror" is implied. It is left to our imagination. This comic is so graphic that the "moral" of the story is lost in the images, and he moral comes off as a tacked-on justification for the graphic depiction of rape. Pulp fiction novels from the 1950's period allowed themselves to be more graphic with the depiction of depraved acts, but never to the extreme that your visuals take it to. There's a line between tawdry storytelling and pornography, and in my opinion that line was crossed. It's a shame, because I liked the look and artistry of the comic.

What is saddest to me is the number of people who read the comic and thought, "cool a naked chick with big boobs having sex," and not minding at all that she is being tortured and raped. That is explotative storytelling. I cannot understand the mindset of such people, and something tells me I do not want to either. (Roger Ebert said as much in his review of "I Spit on Your Grave," and what he said in the 1970's is still true today.)

In sum, your artistic skills are there. The ability to effectively tell a story is not. If you really want to tell a shocking tale with a moral, I would suggest finding some of the old 1950's horror comics and pulp ficiton, where a lot of that horror is left unseen to develop in the mind of the reader. Use that as research and inspiration to tweak your storytelling ability.


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