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Jul 7, 2010 | 7:04 PM EDT

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This is part 2 go watch part 1 first http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/541561

My first comic project of this length, It was done within 5 weeks and I didn't wanna do anything too over the top. Don't take the whole thing seriously and if youre looking for something deep or meaningful you wont find it.
It is what it is, I hope some may enjoy it.

Cause of the file size it had to be divided in 2 parts.

Warning: Contains Cartoon Porn, if you are easily offended by that you shouldn't look through it!

-Shadman

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AnusaurusRexAnusaurusRex

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great style, bad continuity problems.

I LOVED the violent fantasies scenes, very...relatable. Nice art style and flow of panels, how 1 panel is shown at a time.

However, the continuity errors really bothered me. The most obvious was the door. First it was hinged on the left, then in the next panel, the right. Then the girl was clearly slapped on the right cheek, but had bruises on the left.

Nice comic. Hope to see more. =)


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eye-twistereye-twister

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

give some warning next time

Okay, I feel like this comic had a real abrupt change of pace. First, could you give warning that this porn containes rape? I'm not easily offended, but rape goes into a different category, you know?

A few issues I had with the narrative... Well the protagonist is doing things that would violate most readers' moral code, so you have to really make readers sympathize with him. Perhaps more character development? Like, I wasn't really rooting for the protagonist, so the ending may not have gotten the reaction you wanted from readers? Also, the dialogue is a little stiff and not that realistic for the situation. Otherwise, your art style is still really good and I liked the plot for the most part. I think if you worked on pacing and character development you could make some more compelling pieces.


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kazumazkankazumazkan

Rated 5 / 5 stars

awsome

loved the story

awsome comic


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RawGreenRawGreen

Rated 5 / 5 stars

The whole thing

The whole thing truly was horrible, too bad I enjoyed it all up.


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MrGamesAlotMrGamesAlot

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I love the ending, because....

Throughout the comic I hated the main char more and more :D