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Jul 7, 2010 | 7:04 PM EDT

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This is part 2 go watch part 1 first http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/541561

My first comic project of this length, It was done within 5 weeks and I didn't wanna do anything too over the top. Don't take the whole thing seriously and if youre looking for something deep or meaningful you wont find it.
It is what it is, I hope some may enjoy it.

Cause of the file size it had to be divided in 2 parts.

Warning: Contains Cartoon Porn, if you are easily offended by that you shouldn't look through it!

-Shadman

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RapGangstaRapGangsta

Rated 5 / 5 stars

this was nice

wow the part where he was raping the girl oh man that was juicy!



andy9306andy9306

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Meh

The artwork was decent enough but I really couldn't look past the ridiculousness that was the door. If the door opens inwards, putting something through the door handle on the inside will not do anything. At all. It made no sense and ruined the entire scenario because the scenario should not have been happening. There was no physical barrier between the guard and the interior of the washroom. So that did a lot to negatively effect the score I have it.

As for plot it was, well, a bit lacking. Not to the point of penalty but "guy goes crazy and does crazy shit" needs to be done creatively to be entertaining these days.

The whole "it was really a dream" bit is the only positive feature of the comic in my opinion. Which is actually pretty interesting because my reaction to such situations is usually rage. So, good job there I guess.



teck11918teck11918

Rated 5 / 5 stars

WHoa

I didn't think Rape wouldn't make it through the portal... probably cause it's tasteful? there was a reason for it. Sometime if feel just like the main character... just not with the whole raping the hot,cute girl in the work place. make some more comics.



AnusaurusRexAnusaurusRex

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Great style, bad continuity problems.

I LOVED the violent fantasies scenes, very...relatable. Nice art style and flow of panels, how 1 panel is shown at a time.

However, the continuity errors really bothered me. The most obvious was the door. First it was hinged on the left, then in the next panel, the right. Then the girl was clearly slapped on the right cheek, but had bruises on the left.

Nice comic. Hope to see more. =)


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eye-twistereye-twister

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

give some warning next time

Okay, I feel like this comic had a real abrupt change of pace. First, could you give warning that this porn containes rape? I'm not easily offended, but rape goes into a different category, you know?

A few issues I had with the narrative... Well the protagonist is doing things that would violate most readers' moral code, so you have to really make readers sympathize with him. Perhaps more character development? Like, I wasn't really rooting for the protagonist, so the ending may not have gotten the reaction you wanted from readers? Also, the dialogue is a little stiff and not that realistic for the situation. Otherwise, your art style is still really good and I liked the plot for the most part. I think if you worked on pacing and character development you could make some more compelling pieces.


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