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Jul 7, 2010 | 5:54 PM EDT

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well this is my first flash video, i hopr you enjoy it, audio will come later. i honestly don't know how to stop the looping and i'm using free software so i can't get things just how i want them. i will improve on all these things.... eventually

Reviews


magic-swordmagic-sword

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 7, 2010

well done

it was very entertaining and throughout the whole thing, i was wondering "what will happen next?" the loop get's a little annoying, but if you made it so either A, the loop was removed, or B, the "the end" somehow transformed into the begining of the animation. All i have left to say is keep up the good work!



aiman24aiman24

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 7, 2010

for a first, it's fine but...

it lacked a lot.
it's ok to keep it random, but this was a bit overboard with not much going for it.
some suggestions---
sound would be good, so please add when possible.
a loader is also always good
maybe try to shorten the size, because 6mb is quite big for a simple flash which is less than a minute long...

If possible, try to sort this flash out...
it may be trippy, but right now- it's in a partial mess.

good luck to any future developements :)