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My first flash animation. Completed in 4 days. Sound from http://www.freesound.org/
, some recorded by myself (and they are terrible). Since it's just an experiment so it's not good :P.
EDIT: Thanks for nice reviews. I will try another flash, this time will be longer.
Its definitely an unusual flash, it was really good but the animation at times seamed slightly lazy. It showed a lot of creativity and got more random the more it went on. At the end though it just felt like the movie was incomplete i was expecting it to carry on at the newtons cradle or loop back to the start and happen all over again. But fortunately that didn't spoil the movie in any way!
B+ compared to other flashes! Great for a first, now is the stage where you'd move on to character and plot developing. Keep up the good work!
Excellent 3D effects
The only thing this lacks is colour - if this is your first, anything you make after this should be amazing.
a little rough, the animation seems kindve late, as in 3 frames per second instead of a normal amount like 20
This is actually very good for a first video. Don't criticize yourself too much.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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