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UPDATE: You can no longer jump over the big ninja and you should be able to go back and forth from screen to screen smoothly:)
NOTE: This is my first flash game ever. This is the first time that I have worked with actionscript besides coding a play button:)
This game is a pretty simple platformer, but this being my first of many games, I am really excited about how it has turned out. What do you guys think?
Great for a first game.
But it's a lot better than other beginners. I mean for one, it actually worked.
I think the only thing you would need to work on to make the game fun, is to actually put stuff in the game to do, I mean there was only one real obstacle. Maybe you could have made it so you had to get a key to open the door, instead of just clicking on some other ninja.
I think that animation wise, it looked nice. I really like that you did add a bunch of things to the landscape, like a bridge or the powerlines. And the grass, actually looked like grass, not just a big green rectangle. I think you could have added a bit more detail into some other stuff such as the big rock wall that you fall by, but it was okay.
nice for your first game
this is really cool for your first game.. the graphics are really nice, also the game is fun to play. but there's definitely room for improvement. like when I'm going down from a hill, it's just like I'm falling, the collusion detection isn't good there. Also when i hit the knives nothing happens (or when I'm jumping i got onto them). And it wasn't really clear that I had jump on a stone, after that jump on a tack of a tree, and then jump onto the building. And the game doesn't really have a plot (except for searching a taco XD).But it's still all good for your first game. in the next game you might add enemy's and attacks, lives, and make it more an platform game. But overall: really good job !
this is realy good
the scenery is well drawn the character looks nice and is overall a well made game.
it was okay...
The game wasn't that good because it was just...Well, bland. but the art was pretty good. From now I think you should make a vertical platforming game (Think climbing buildings in Assassins Creed)
or a 2D puzzle adventure game like Zelda but 2D
A fair first attempt
If this is indeed your first attempt at a flash game, it's not a bad start, but there are some fairly large problems with it. First off, it is quite obvious that some of the scenes in this game are copied from Nevermore; I noticed this as soon as I entered the fourth screen.
Another problem is simply the coding. You can't go back at the fourth screen, walking downhill is not smooth, and you can randomly jump through certain objects. You don't even need to speak with the ninja to open the door; it opens after leaving the cave and coming right back, and if you go right back outside after that, the game glitches and you can't do anything.
Also, a game of this type should be much longer and have a more interesting plot.
One thing I thought you did pretty well was the main character. I really like the idle animation, and the jump is nice too. The run cycle works but it could use some more inbetweens.
Keep practicing and you can make something great!
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